Good work.I like the colour of the paragraph,it makes the writing stand out.I love the way you included the facts in a video log that will make it easier for younger children who are not so good at reading.I also love the stary backround it makes the green stand out.Also you have chosen a nice selection of facts including jupiter was named after a roman god and it is the third brightest planet in the solar system. Mabye next time you could include another paragraph of for a quiz or for facts e.t.c.
I love the back round nice vido
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